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Tuesday 12 March 2013

Deep in the Jungle


Deep in the jungle
there is a mad beast
he is king of all animals,
waiting and waiting
for its prey.

the mad beast is as strong as a weightlifter,
its eyes glow so bright like a torch light,
the mad beast is almighty.

with its very scary roar
  it will make you flee
and with its powerful claws
it won’t let you free!!

3 comments:

  1. Great work Leenas. I love your poem!

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  2. HI leenas,
    That is a mighty poem of yours
    and I like the photo you picked he looks really ruff!
    do you know how many weights he tiger can left.

    by Savannah

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  3. Hi Leenas

    I really like your piece of writing you make
    the lion sound ruff. I also like how you have described the
    character and the ryhming is really good keep up the good work.

    From
    Caitlin

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