Breaking News:
Early this morning Jack and Jill sadly got hurt.
Around about 7am Jack and Jill were having breakfast when their mother told them to go fetch a pail of water. So Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water. Jack fell down and sadly cracked his skull. Shortly afterwards Jack saw Jill tumbling after him and she was badly injured when she bashed into Jack.
While Jack and Jill were lying down injured and not being able to move. Their friends Peter and Grace found them lying down injured and decided to help Jack and Jill get treatment for their injuries.
Jack and Jill's father and mother were shocked to see Jack and Jill hurt. Jack and Jill's mother put them in their beds with vinegar and brown paper to bound their heads. We all hope they get well.
Leenas you have worked really hard to change this nursery rhyme into a report. I like the way your report is written in paragraphs and the way you used your imagination.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great report writing.